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Oh wow, that's cool! Haha, hey, it's worth a shot, certainly no harm in being ambitious ;) No worries, I'm glad I could help!

No worries, I'm glad I could be of help :3 I got your tag for the first chapter, and I shall definitely check it out soon :D

No worries, I'm glad I could be of assistance! Haha, that's fair enough, hardly a big issue at all though :)

No worries! Really? That's so awesome, my first book was easily the most exciting, so I'm sure you'll have a blast writing it :D I hope you're settling in well!

Awesome, it would be super great if you did :3 Thanks again!

Thank you muchly! I agree with you on the opening line thing. It does loosely connect to something way in the last chapter, but that may be a little too ...

Thanks for the review! The cliche-ness is a bit of a weird one because in some sense, it's intentional. One of the ideas of this novel is to deal with ...

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you liked it overall!

No worries :) That's more than fair, everyone's experiences are different!

No worries!

Ah, I see!! Now it makes sense. You could maybe put the characters' names at the beginning of each chapter (or whenever it's in their POV). Most multiple POV stories ...

No worries :D Great, I look forward to it!

I've just re-read this after your edit, and you've done a really awesome job! You definitely listened to the reviews you'd received, so kudos to you for that. I love ...

That's a very fair point. As you can tell, I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed :P

Ah, that makes sense now. I figured this was probably just a section of the first chapter, so that explains quite a lot! Yeah, just a bit more of a ...