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Oh, of course, the last thing I want is for everything to suddenly explode in a mass of stuff , I just like foreshadowing, things that make me go hm, ...

Join us! Join us! Revel in the peer pressure! NEVER In all seriousness, thanks so much for this, you've been uber helpful. One of the main reasons I avoid poetry ...

Thanks so much for your feedback :)

Thanks for the review, cakerissa, it's muchly appreciated :3 I 100% agree with you on the lack of clarity thing. One of the main reasons I avoid poetry is striking ...

Hahaha, I'm sorry!

Aw thank you, this makes me feel a lot better!

No worries, I'm glad I could be of help! Oh, don't worry about it, I do that all the time. I'll be writing like a madman, then post on YWS ...

Ah I see, in fairness, it's probably just me being dumb. Ermhagerd, I'm excited already!

Yay, I'm not just spouting out random, irrelevant stuff! And my gifs don't weird you out, even better news :P

Thanks so much, especially for noting the spacing issues. It always happens when I copy and paste to YWS, and there's always something I miss, ugh. The narrative style is ...

Thanks for the review, it's muchly appreciated, and was a lot of help. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter overall :) Be sure to let me know if you ever ...

OMG HI, DON'T EVER LEAVE EVER AGAIN I SWEAR TO GOD. But thanks for the review xox Thanks for pointing out the spacing issues at the beginning, it always does ...

Oh god, I'm just complicating things, aren't I? Oops. Striking the balance is beyond difficult, which is honestly why I'm too chicken to even attempt anything fantasy-esque myself. I do ...

That's 100% just me being an idiot :P My brain is far more frazzled than I thought, my apologies! Just ignore me and my poor brain functions. That's definitely true, ...

Aw good, that's awesome to hear! Thank you :3