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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Return

    Heya cafe :) Because you don't have any reviews as of yet, I'll review this right now. The deep purple skies showed an absolute beauty. The greenery of the trees ...

    May 29, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Into the Depths Chapter 1 [Reworked]

    Heya Eli :) Here to review, believe it or not. I'm probably going to epically fail at this review, everyone else have given you great reviews. I will try my ...

    May 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: True Sacrafice-chapter 1

    Isha, you man. Here to review, duh. :smt001 She is mute , but I know what she wants. You don't need this comma here. I look to my sister, Rebecca ...

    May 28, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Introduction - please give feedback

    Heya :smt003 Here to review as requested, cos I is cool. Olivia stepped into the parking lot and breathed in/out deeply. I think that you should either put in or ...

    May 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My life as a human dreamcatcher Part 4

    Heya Violet :) Here to review, believe it or not... Okay , I knew I that, because of my dreams, I could be gullible, but really, that was just too ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Love Has No Boundaries-Ch-2

    Everyone's beaten me to this... :( Well, Isha and Kyllorac have, anyway. They've covered, like, everything though. I'll try my best to find something! I pressed my head against the ...

    May 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: *deleted*

    Why hello there Isha... *does a perverted face*. Jeff here to review. Had he really just seen what he thought he had? He drew in a deep breath and released ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Adventures of the SPEW Gryphon III (Episode II)

    Heya :) You know the drill... Now this is going to be a crappy review... sorry. Mainly because I couldn't spot any grammar errors, you annoying toilet brush. Therefore, I'm ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Story, The Song, and The Picture (prolouge)

    Heya, here to review as requested. 8) Finally, summer's coming. Short, sweet and simple. I like it. :) Carefully, she pulled her diary from her school bag . M aking ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Frozen Rose - Part 1 (Rated for swearing.)

    Heya Lava! Here to review, 'cause I is cool. 8) The room was crammed with people, yet it was cold; the ancient room heater was wheezing and trying to spew ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (1)

    Heya! Here to review... duh. :wink: “Just in time,” muttered another man , sitting on a boulder. “Ah, nothing, master . Just Sven grumbling. Um, yes. Yes, we’re all here. ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Deleted

    This isn't really a review; sorry! It's just that I can't really find much to critique here at all. Especially not something that I haven't already mentioned before. Your grammar ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Criminal's Heart : Ch-7

    Heya :smt003 You know the drill. I felt my career, my glorious career, break down into pieces as I glared at the colorful screen of my plasma screen, which was ...

    May 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: After Adonis Ch. 2

    Here's JOHNNY! :twisted: I don't know if you wanted me to review this or not, but I am anyway. Go figure. Hera picked up a normal hand mirror. It was ...

    May 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: After Adonis

    Yooooo 8) :pirate3: :) :smt004 :smt003 A.K.A, I'm in a good mood. Here to review, as requested! I know nothing about Greek mythology, so I'll probably suck at this. I'm ...

    May 19, 2010


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