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Timmyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. Hi. This is my way of trying to redeem myself. I'm cool. Newport? New price, There's a town called Newport near me! :D Sorry, that's irrelevant. and payed by ...

Heya :) You only have one review so far so I thought I'd give you another. I don't think I've reviewed anything of yours before so I'll let you know ...

Woop! Another awesome parody by thehobbitgangster! :lol: Like usual, this isn't a proper critique... I just thought that I'd drop by and tell you how much I liked this. I ...

Heya :) I'm here to review as requested. I'm not the best at reviewing poetry so I might not be able to give this a very good critique. I'll try ...

Heya Tam :) I'm here to review as requested. Just to warn you, I'm not the best when it comes to poetry critiques. If we could speak to God, w ...

Hey there, Shubhi :) I'm here to review as requested. I've reviewed plenty of your stiff before, therefore, you know how I review! I will begin with some of my ...

'Tis me again. :twisted: I'm sure you know the drill by now, Dreamy! I'll start off with the nit-picks, then move on to my overall opinion on this piece. Class ...

Heya Dreamy :) I'm here to review as requested. I haven't actually reviewed any fiction in quite a while... it feels like that anyway. Haha! There's a guy with a ...

Joanna; I saw the way you walked over from the bar, y ou r pale red lips caught my eye. Your grey eyes overshadowed by dark mascara, and your rose ...

Hey Eli :) I'm here to review as requested. I am not the best critique when it comes to poetry, so you're going to have to bare with me on ...

Heya Violet :D I'm here to review as requested. I'm pretty bad at poetry reviews so you'll have to bare with me! Dead. All souls become. But what is after ...

Heya Horseradish! I'm here to review as requested. Diana; You sit in the corner, tittering quietly to friends, One swooning maroon sleeve creeping down your sloping Shoulder like a guilty ...

alakazam... sorry, I saw the title and it was so tempting. :smt003 :lol: Anyway! Onto your review. When it comes to poetry, I am no way the best critique because ...

Waaasssaaaaap?! :smt118 Considering you abused me in my WRRF thread, I decided to come and review this. I suck at poetry reviews, but I'll give this a go. 'Cause I'm ...

Heya austenite :) I'm here to review as requested. As usual, I'll start this review off with the nit-picks, if I can find any. After I've finished with that, I'll ...