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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Killing for Love

    Apppleeeeeee :) Hi. I'm here to review as requested. Congrats on getting featured, by the way! I drove the dagger deep into his heart, watching as he squirmed in pain ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I've Already Tried ~contest entry~

    Fancy seeing you here, ultraviolet. :) I'll cut any blabber and get straight onto our review! My mom left three years ago. That’s when it started ; my father’s death. ...

    Sep 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [6]

    Yoooo 8) Im sure you know the drill by now! xD All of a sudden, she pulled me into an embrace. I didn’t fight back, that would have been rude. ...

    Sep 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [5]

    'Tis me again. 8) I'll cut the blabber and get straight to the review, beginning with any nit-picks that I have. I let out a snort, “I guess not.” I ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Reprisal - Prologue + Chapter One

    Hey there, Jai! :D I'm really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really e.t.c sorry about getting to this so late. I feel like an idiot, but I forgot about ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sarah

    Hey there. :) I'm here to review your poem for you. I'm sure you're aware by now of how I review, so I'll just get onto it! Little sister , ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [4]

    Hey there, Pink. I'm here to review chapter four for you. I'm actually on time today! :lol: She was wearing a yellow top and some denim shorts , showing legs ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: E's Diary - Prologue Part 1 - To Meet...

    Heya Roal :) I'm sorry I've gotten to this late. It's just that I've had a lot of review requests lately and I've been trying to keep up with them. ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Dear You.

    Heya Jas :) I'm here to review as requested. One thing I'd like to mention before I get started is that I think you should take out the part in ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [September Contest] The Third Man

    Hey there, Ben. :) I'm sorry, times 100, that I didn't get to this sooner, let alone on time for the contest. I logged onto YWS and altogether, I had ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [3]

    Heya :D Sorry that I got to this late again... I clearly fail at keeping things up to schedule. I'm here now though and I'll hopefully be able to give ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Jumping Blind #1 [Dogs of War Contest]

    Hey there, Isaac :) I'm here to review as requested! Can I just say that you avatar is really cute... I have a thing for cats! I haven't been the ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Felt Grass

    Heya! 'Tis me again. Afraid...? Good. :D Felt grass, static smiles , t ailored suits in a trendy style . A sports car and a sense of pride b ecause ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Click, Click

    Heya Scarlette! Sorry I'm getting to this kind of late... I'm here now though. :) Jack looked around for a moment. “Did your parents get rid of the doghouse?” “Dog ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [2]

    Heya Pink! Sorry I didn't get to this sooner, especially after telling you that I'd get one review done a day... *slaps face* It was my dad's birthday and things ...

    Sep 19, 2010


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