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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I

    Heya jash! :) I'm finally here to review this for you! Considering there are two parts, what I'm going to do is review the first part in one post, then ...

    Oct 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Beautiful Inside, Ugly Outside

    Heya SilentRain. :) I'm here to review this, at last! Sorry I've taken longer than I normally do; I had a pile of requests, so I had to get a ...

    Oct 18, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Howling of Silverveil (1)

    Hey there, Moo :) I'm here to review as requested. I'm sorry I'm kind of late, I went away for the weekend. I'm here now though, so it's all good! ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Teenager's World

    It's me again! I'm here for my last review. This looks like quite an interesting little story, so hopefully, I won't have too many critiques or nit-picks for it. Dear ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Hate or Love? *edited*

    Hey there, Nike. I'm finally here to review this for you! Maybe the thing between us is, um, uh ... Well, okay --I can't think of any word but hate. ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Friendship Reunion prt.1 *edited*

    Heya Nike :) I was sitting at my desk , watching my hugest crush stand at the front of the class. He was showing us his project on (a) Action ...

    Oct 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Till Death Do Us Apart-Chapter 1

    Yo. 8) I won't blabber (for once). Instead, I'll just get straight onto the review! Most of your nit-picks seem to be covered, but I'll se if I can find ...

    Oct 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Lure of Crickets

    Heya, Flower! :) First of all, I'm going to say how happy I am to see you writing again. I always enjoy reading and reviewing your poems, so I'm glad ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Hatched Chapter One

    Heya jDawn! :) I'm here to review as requested. You've got some nice reviews here, so hopefully, I won't end up repeating everything that's already been said. Anyway, I'll start ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Two Beeps, Two Dead

    Heya :D I love scary stories, so I thought I'd review this for you. There's actually an October contest going on right now where you have to write a short ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Third Avenue

    Heya :) I'm here to review as requested! I apologise if I repeat anything that's already been said. I'll try not to do so unless I think it's entirely necessary. ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Light and Shadow - Chapter 3

    Heya! :D I'ma actually going to review this, for once. I've been stalking it for a while, but not reviewed anything... I have a tendency to do that. I'm here ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Beautiful?

    Yo. Sup. 8) I'm here to review as requested! You've already got some great reviews, so I'll try not to repeat anything that's already been said unless I think it's ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Echo

    Heya :) I'm actually happy that you don't have another stanza to this. I personally prefer short and sweet poems rather than long, overly descriptive ones. Besides, this poem works ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [12]

    Heya, Pink! I'm glad to see that you've posted the next chapter of this! I'm struggling to be happy with the next chapter of A Shot of Arrogance. I always ...

    Oct 8, 2010


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