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I'm back :P We didn't have heaps going on in this extract, but you gave us a glimpse into Jasnah's (Jannah?) home life, which was interesting. It' important to do ...

hihi :D You've got some good dialogue in here, I must say. Jasnah, Manisha, and Rachelle's relationship seemed nice and natural, and I liked that they had a bit of ...

ohhithere. WE FINALLY MET SURAJ OMG. He seems interesting. Not really what I expected, though I can't say I'm too sure what I did expect as Kerani hadn't really thought ...

I'm back again! :P Right, so, I don't have heaps to say about this extract because it's not super long and there's nothing especially outstanding happening as it is the ...

At long last, here I am to review this! *throws confetti* So. This is interesting, and I love how you're already throwing unusual, mystical going ons in the first chapter. ...

Well, didn't I just take my time here. I figured I'd come and leave a review on this chapter, though this review will cover the past five chapters. Only because ...

Well, haven't I just taken 23482332 decades to get to this :D Sincerest apologies! My chilled summer ended up turning into a billion things to do a billion times over, ...

Hihi, I'm finally here! :D “Okay fine, just shut me in! Like, that’s going to make things any worse!” All that shouting whisked me away from my deep slumber. NEW ...

Well, didn't I just take my sweet time with this. My sincerest apologies! I've been busier than planned, and have heaps of owed reviews. Hopefully I'll be useful enough here ...

Just kidding, I'm not the messiah. Close, but not quite. Oh wow, so this was all cliffhangery and intense and stuff . I thoroughly enjoyed this part, so go you! ...

Heyhey! There wasn't heaps going on in this chapter, and on the whole it was pretty tame, but it was good on the whole. It was nice to find out ...

Long time no see, eh? :P We didn't have heaps going on in this part, but nonetheless, it was nice, solid read. As such, I may not have heaps to ...

Hi! After spending two hours fishing with Ryouma in Satsuma... Why am I only now realising the name of this place, I love me a good satsuma. This was a ...

Hey, here tonight as promised :) Let's get right into things, shall we? There isn't heaps to say about this chapter because it was quite an uneventful one without anything ...

Hihi! I was hoping to review this (and the next chapter) on review day, but I had a busier Sunday than expected. Hopefully I'll be able to finish the reviews ...