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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Be careful what you wish for

    Hey Angel. :P I'm here to review as requested! You've got some nice reviews already, so hopefully, I'll be able to give you a critique on something that hasn't already ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Wings And Fins (Chapter 1) Rewritten

    Heya Spike. :) I'm here to review as requested, but it seems that you've already gotten two reviews by two wonderful reviewers. I'll try and avoid repeating what they've said, ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Giving-December contest!

    Hey Crafty. :) As I'm sure you know, non-fiction isn't my high point when it comes to critiques. Taking that into account, I can't guarantee that this review will be ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Tales of the old religion Pt1

    Heya. :) I reviewed the old version of this, I think, didn't I? It'll be interesting to see how this one compares to the older version, even though the older ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [16]

    Punk. HAI. I'm to review this... as shocking as it may sound. You've already gotten a couple of reviews, but hopefully, mine will still be helpful. One thing before I ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Dirty Doves (Chapter One) P1/2

    Ben! I'm finally here! I'm a hundred times sorry that this has taken me so long. I hope you don't mind... Things have just been a little hectic lately. I'm ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: No light

    Heya, Music! :P I see that this is your first post, so I thought I'd come and review it for you. Unfortunately for me, you seem to have gotten a ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stargazer {part 2 }

    Hey point. :) I'm not sure how helpful this review's going to be because I'm in a bit of a rush, so I'm sorry if this is a little short ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Against All Odds Prologue (NaNo)

    Hey Isebella :) I like what you've got here, Isebella. I think that it has loads of potential and the plot itself seems to be a really interesting one. This ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Into the Depths. 2 *Edited*

    Heya, Ellie. :) I'm seeing the connection between your old version of Into the Depths and this recent version now. The Irish guy and the candle holders. :P I have ...

    Dec 12, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Almost

    Hey, Angela! I'm finally here to review this. I'm ever so sorry it's taken me a while. You seem to have already gotten some great reviews, so I'm not sure ...

    Dec 12, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Salesman (contest entry)

    Hey there, Lee! I'm so, so, so, so, so, so sorry I haven't reviewed this until now. I've been bogged down with a lot of reviews lately, and I will ...

    Dec 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Into the Depths. 1

    Hey, Ellie! I'm here to review as requested. I'll begin by saying... Yaaaay! Ships, historical stuff and shizz! :D You're a fan of writing these kind of novels, aren't you? ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Brothers

    Hey Roal. :) I'm here to review as requested! If you have any questions or comments after this review, just let me know. I'd be happy to answer any questions ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Almost But Not Quite Suicidal Cherry Sucker *Revised*

    Yoooooooooooooooo. Hi. I'm finally here to review this! Tanya's already giving you a great review, so I'll try not to repeat what she's already said. I'm not going to get ...

    Dec 9, 2010


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
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