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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Two

    Hey Sushi, sorry I'm a little late, but alas I am finally here! I skimmed back over the past few chapters and noticed that you've edited them a lot, and ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Gift of Christmas

    Rydiaaaaaaaaaaaaa So I'm here for my second completely Secret Santa unrelated review, and as the last piece i read and reviewed was pretty dark, I figured I'd pick something more ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Behind The Mirror

    So I'm not your Secret Santa and this isn't the first of my two reviews as your Secret Santa because like I said, I'm not your Secret Santa. But if ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Arwen: Dawnstar - Chapter 1

    Hey Scar, I was lurking in the Green Room when I found this, and thought it sounded interesting. Sooooooooo, I am here to review! I won't get into any nit-picks ...

    Jul 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Show Us The Way - Chapter 1

    So as you've reviewed my chapter for me, I thought it only fair that I return the favour! :) I've read your Author's note and before I begin, I will ...

    Jul 9, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ghost of winter

    Hey there, Copp, and welcome to YWS :) I've dropped by to review this for you, and I'm going to give you my overall opinion on your story by including ...

    Jul 1, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Little Red Riding Hood ~A Children's Story?~

    Hey WritingWolf, I think this may just be my last review of Review Day! Let's hope that I can squeeze it in on time, eh? Now I'm not going to ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Coming Storm

    Hey GoonerGirl, I'm currently on a mission to get some final reviews done for this Review Day, and through said process I have stumbled upon the little story you have ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Past (2) *Revised*

    Hey there, singingwriter, if I remember correctly I read the first part of this, didn't I? I found the first part pretty interesting so I'm really interested to see what ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Horror Re: Things in the Deep - Prologue

    Hey Aquestioning, I'm currently on a mission to do as many reviews as I can before Review Day ends, and so here I am! You've already got some pretty epic ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: delete please

    Hey panda, I saw that you'd posted this in Team Fire Flower's forums requesting some reviews, so I figured I'd come and give you one. You have quite a few ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: The Game

    Hey there, Imaginator, I spotted that you'd posted in the Team Fire Flower forum asking for reviews, and so I figured I'd come check it out and review it for ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Notice Me Lavvie

    Iggy, mah home skillin' biscuit, as it's review day and you've been kind enough to review one of my pieces, I figured I'd come and review this for you. You've ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Risk ch 6

    Hey there, CandidDreamer, this has been the last piece in the Green Room and it's been eyeing me up for a while. I've finally given in, and so I've come ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Fog

    Hey there, June, I have to admit that I've sort of come to admire this more than I've come to review it because I briefly skim read it before review ...

    Jun 30, 2013


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