Sins

Hey there zsmith! Let's get right into things :) Your characters are really beginning to develop now, and I'm getting a good feel of their dynamics. I'm not sure if ...

Hey cakerissa, me again! This review may be a short one because I have heaps of reading for my class tomorrow that I really should be doing, but I wanted ...

Hey Rascalover! :D Ohana means family. Family means nobody gets left behind or forgotten. Lilo & Stitch was my everything, you don't understand. So your AN really caught my intention ...

Wassuuuuup. Okay so because I was a naughty Skins and got to this pretty slowly, your previous reviewers have pretty much covered everything already. Nonetheless, I will prevail and attempt ...

Hey there, Costa! Welcome to YWS :P I hope you have a great experience here and decide to stick around because this site is such a fantastic place to improve ...

Hey there cakerissa, me again! I preferred this chapter to the second one, I must say, mainly because of the way you paced this one. It was a lot slower ...

Me again :P I have to admit, my 7 brain cells were super confused for the first paragraph or so of this after coming straight from the first chapter. I ...

Hey there, how's it going? I spotted chapter two of this in the green room, and I was just going to read this first chapter and continue on to the ...

Wassssuup. I came across this lurking in the green room, so being the good-hearted citizen that I am, I figured I'd come and pull it out of there for you. ...

Heya Emily, I found this chapter of yours lurking in the green room and noticed you didn't really have any reviews on it, so I figured I'd come and give ...

Hey there, I noticed this chapter of yours in the green room, so figured I'd come take a look at it for you :D I see your quite new to ...

Yay another chapter! :D Let's get right into it, shall we? Joe finally got to use his powers, yay for Joe! While the idea of a person's powers coming to ...

Hey there cakerissa, I saw this lonely little work of yours in the green room, so figured I'd come review it for you! Firstly, welcome to YWS! I really hope ...

Hey there, zsmith! I see you're pretty new here, so welcome to YWS :P I read your first chapter, and then moved on to this one to give you an ...

Warning: This work has been rated 18+ for language, violence, and mature content. Now that's what I'm talking about 8) Ooooooo, so this is very intriguing, and super original. I ...