Simran135

Hey! The title is eye-catching and so is the first sentence (or the dialogue?). You took a rich, spoilt, arrogant and narcissist character and delivered the poetic justice in the ...

Hey! The title is eye-catching and so is the first sentence (or the dialogue?). You took a rich, spoilt, arrogant and narcissist character and delivered the poetic justice in the ...

First of all, I'd like to appreciate the choice of your title. It was the title that lured me into reading this. The language and the flow was great. You ...

Thanks :) that's a detail I seemed to have missed. I'll keep it in mind when I get around to editing this again.

Thanks Abhipsa :) Thanks for pointing out the 'diary entry' bit. I see my mistake clearly now. Also, I'll try to improve from the next one onwards. Thanks once again!

Thank you :)

Hi.. Thanks a lot for your review. This was my very first attempt at writing. I hope that I can improve a bit from the next one onwards. I'll keep ...