SimonCowellLuver

Very interesting. XD I like it. Need some grammar work because some of them sound awkward when read. But that can be easily edited. Ta Ta for now SimonCowellLuver 8)

This is a nice story and its descriptive which i like. Good Job I must say i didn't find any spelling errors or punctionuation errors neither. I really enjoyed reading ...

[quote="Gwenevire"]Let It Bleed Chapter Four Foos Small birds chirped, the southing noise of waves, and the cool spray of the ocean pelted the rocks eager to get a taste of ...

[quote="Flemzo"][i][Prompt was "write a poem about how you feel about valentine's day". Hopefully my message is clear. Any help on a title would be great. This is due on, when ...

[quote="Summer"]I am reading Twilight right now finally, and this just popped in my head. I Fear thy whom I loved By Summer I fear thy whom I loved with the ...

[quote="Warrior Princess"]I know this play is VERY random and VERY retarded and VERY short but I'm experiencing both writer's and actress's block right now and it was the best I ...

Hey I have some critiquing to do here. So lets get to it shall we. First of all I don't like the repition that is going on here Next stupid ...

Black sphere, elongated. Double yellow, The colour’s blurred. Its color's not colour's Sweat film on forehead, My forehead, Why did you put "my forehead" again? It sounds awkward. The rest ...

[quote="Weatherthestorm"]This sift and soft played melody-- I cannot hear the rain. It plays for long and sets me free To hear the quiet song again. Dripping leaves are a [u]cacophony[/u] ...

Great poem but some punctionuation errors here like in the first stanza Broken glass, Whisper your stories. Melt the tears Of cold, dead hearts. If there was a comma on ...

[quote="triggerfingerxx"]So dear, Come sit with me, Let’s talk. How about we converse in body language, I thonk these two lines right here is very sophisticated. I like them. The Esperanto ...

[quote="Amelia"][s]Lite-shuttled light from above couldn't even penetrate the darkness of our palms at this dirt-dirty crossing with not a nothing in sight. Skip the change and close the frame: no ...

[quote="kittykat"]This is my first poem posted, hope you like it! Please tell me what you think! I'm not very good at writing poems on the side like most people do ...

[quote="tania"]Your blood is my drink; Your eyes are my future; Your body is my fortresse; And your mind is my soul.[/quote] I like it somewhat not to be offensive it ...

Adrenaline rush makes hearts pound ReWrite this sentence to make more sense like Adrenaline rush makes the heart pound. Invincible to attempted schism What is Schism? Stalwart to the very ...