Silversun

I'm not going to lie...I really think that those last two lines make the poem so special. Not just because they rhyme, but because it's the truth of the entire ...

Hello, this sounds like quite an interesting story behind it. I really only have a few suggestions for you. My dull heart is making no sound. Instead of is making, ...

I thought it was cute and sad at the same time. I do also wish I could know how he got this concussions. Is there going to be more? Because ...

I really liked it :) I thought you really developed the characters well and gave them all very defined personalities. The story itself was good too, although a little sad. ...

Wow, I really loved this story. What's even better is that I flew today, and the way you described it so accurately was honestly amazing! My favorite accurate thing would ...

Oh...my...goodness... Please don't give up :) This was one of the most enrapturing stories I've read on here! It was realyl brilliant! I suggest you keep writing this one! Plus, ...

Wow, that was a very touching story. I'll have to say that maybe the narrator should be a little more sad at sometimes, like choking back tears or something, but ...

Wow Lin! Impressive story, or beginning to a story, if I do say so myself. I love how alive Amalia is so peppy and pretty! I love her already :) ...

Okay, I'm not going to any quoting unlike my very generous colleagues above, but I will say this. Very interesting story, I had a dream about something like this once ...

Honestly, it really kept my interest the entire time! Kudos to you! The only minor flaw I had in it was when exactly the wolf-girl left. It never says when ...

Well, I'm new here too, but I have just some small things. First though, I'll tell you what I liked a lot. :) The first sentence was very captivating, which ...