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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: He could be the one

    I'm not sure, but this could be mild plagiarism. Because your first two lines are exactly from the song, the main lines are, and it says "he's got something special." ...

    Nov 18, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: SHORT STORY

    Well, I can't really go back and nit-pick. I thought that it was very, very nively done and that I could barely stop reading it. I starred it :) I ...

    Nov 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: katy lost her virginity yesterday

    First of I'm going to have to five Poison props (yep, just said that) for doing such a detailed grammatical review. Nice job Poison, people like you make YWS better ...

    Nov 8, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Whatshername *Edited*

    Hello Quietloud, do you have any other names you like to be called? Also, welcome back! With school, I too have been finding it hard to get back on here. ...

    Nov 8, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: terrible colors

    Hey there 77479. So I've tried to break down your post in a number of ways and cannot seem to find a rhyme sceme. I've tried the one Princess did ...

    Nov 7, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: How to Live - Chapter 3 Part II

    Okay, I'm not here to do a nitpick because it's late where I'm from and I couldn't do it correctly. I'd like you to know that I just went and ...

    Oct 26, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Secret Life of a Window Cleaner

    HI Jetpack, I'll be reviewing your loverly piece of work :) Well, I know some other people really didn't like the 'voice' but I thought it was charming. Since you ...

    Oct 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: .

    Hello, I tried to be quite in depth and do my job right. :) Captain Erinack Broodmarsh stood in front of his men and looked out over the field of ...

    Oct 25, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Nonsensical Timmy Song

    I could honestly just picture someone belting that out with all their voice. Maybe that's because I did... :) Hahaha not really but I did think that was very cute ...

    Oct 24, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: It Ends Tonight

    Hey there, I don't really know if I'd count this as a poem, but it's definitely cute. I don't consider it Plagiarism since you said they're all songs from artists ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Facade (PG 13)

    Hey there, I really just wanted to say that I enjoyed the story and am looking forward to reading more. The whole situation is set up very realistically, kudos, but ...

    Sep 22, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: What is God?

    I'm so glad to see someone who shares my beliefs on here. I feel like there are so many stories like yours and I love to hear them. You really ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: perspective of an entertainer-PG13 (edited version)

    Hey, most of what I caught was said by Lauren, so I just want to let you know that this was a very interesting piece, but since it kind of ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Virus - 1

    Hello there, I'll just be adding on a little bit. I kind of agree with Conrad Rice, but just want to say that by adding little details about how she ...

    Sep 18, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: covent garden

    Hey there! I'm here to review some poetry :) and the lamplighters come, one by one, putting their iron nightcaps over the dawdling gaslights, I really like this line as ...

    Sep 14, 2009


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