Silverdragon150

Hi Drama! I saw the first one, and decided I would read them all. I like the first one especially; it reminds me of a character I made, and has ...

Hey Drama! I was reading your stuff, and I found this! I love it, a lot. I think you have good imagery, nice descriptions, and especially good phrasing. I can ...

Hi! I'm also a big fan of Warriors. I started reading your story, and so far, I like it. You could add a little more description, like describing the forest ...

I read your story, seeing it was about a dragon. I love it, to put my feelings simply. I like the plot so far, I like Lidia's character, and I ...

Right off, I like how you have used the imagery. Of what I was expecting of the first line, it wasn't what I got. I like it, it seems to ...

Hi! I loved reading your poem, all the figurative language you used and the pictures it gives. I have to admit, I'm not very good with nitpicks, but I can ...

I finally reached this point. My jaw dropped at the end; that was a seriously fast turn of events, which is okay but I think I missed one thing. What ...

I finished reading this, and let me say, I wanted more, definitely. You have a very nice cliff hanger. I haven't read Twilight either, and I have that kind of ...

I like the really eerie feeling the end gives the reader, but it does seem a bit like a prologue. But, I'm a newer writer, so feel free not to ...

I have to post on this one. I must say, I have found this true at many points in my life. I get stuck inside all the lies and sadness, ...

Love this story. I like how you add this predicament to make things even more complicated. Fenrir does seem to be a bit sure of himself, a good setup for ...

Wow. I haven't seen that one recently: Two become allies with the treat to turn each other in. It's dynamic, original, and you've got the characters to pull it off. ...

First off, I just have to say this as a fan who has reached a good, exciting point in a book: Yes, yes! I knew it! I love how that ...

This chapter certainly is great for Plot development. I like they way it turned out, only making the situation more mysterious and forming possibilities in my mind. This chapter shows ...

I like this story overall, and I really want to see how it progresses. It has a good foundation, in my opinion, and a chance for some real character development. ...