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Costs
This is rather awkward for me. I've never posted on this board or asked for contructive critism on a poem. Well, here goes nothing. He stands at your side Your ...
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The Insecures
This piece may or may not fit here. I wrote this for an English project and am eagerly awaiting my English teacher's feedback. I'm attached to it though and would ...
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Boys of Blue
This is about two guys I know. I'd like some constructive critism. Thanks. Vulnerability shones in those baby blues You must be wondering if I care what you have to ...
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Get Used To It
One day I counted you friend The next you were my foe All because of a few words Cool stares in my direction Cruel words behind my back I better ...