SilverLove

"Too terrible"? "Too terrible" ??? Honey, this is a gorgeous poem! The imagery is beautiful and vivid, and the message is very different to a lot of the poetry you ...

This is a great mini-story, and I know how hard it is to write something well with such as small word limit! (Goodness knows I can't do it!) I only ...

I really liked your story, lots of great description :) It's a good length, too, because it stops before her thinking processes start to get a little repetitive or boring. ...

Hi AngelKnight900 :) I thought that this poem was really interesting, and had some wonderful lines full of imagery. The message behind it was touching and poignant, and just really ...

Hi preachergirl18! I liked your poem a lot, it has a lot of emotion behind it. However, you did make a few spelling/grammar mistakes :( You perfect in every way ...

Hey there :) First of all, I loved this story! It was bittersweet and beautiful. I especially liked how the memory of the berry bushes is linked back in at ...

Haha, I actually really liked the slightly offbeat rhythm! It seemed to fit the topic, making your mind sound a bit offbeat itself. The one thing that I picked up ...

Hey there :) This is a wonderful prologue, and I certainly hope that you post more! As the reviewer above me said, your descriptive language is great. I especially like ...

I really liked this - the tense made it kind or creepy, like it was from the point of view of someone who knew what was going to happened, but ...

Hey there :) First of all, I absolutely love this poem! It's full to bursting (in a good way) with gorgeous imagery that really works. I especially love the lines ...

Hey Baconator - When I first started reading this I wasn't too sure, but by the end I really liked it. I especially like the way that each different encounter ...