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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: My Child

    Thank you! I've never thought of it in that way. It's really interesting to hear what others think. Did you see anything/would you like to share anything that I could, ...

    Oct 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Lady in the park

    Hi! I really like the idea of this piece, though it's a tad bit cliche, especially in the beginning. There are some sentence fragments and other grammatical errors scattered here ...

    Oct 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Numbers

    Thank you, all! The disconnection is intentional, to symbolize kind a Cartesian duality where the anoretic doesn't necessarily feel a big connection to her own body, and the monotony of ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Goodbye

    Thank you guys for the excellent reviews! I had experimented a bit with different words for both the title and the ending. "Good-bye" sort of slipped my mind. I think ...

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The earth that was

    Oh, okay :) I didn't know there were more parts. I'm sure this would make much more sense if I had read the other parts :P Also, same for me. ...

    May 25, 2011


The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein