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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: My Child

    Thank you! I've never thought of it in that way. It's really interesting to hear what others think. Did you see anything/would you like to share anything that I could, ...

    Oct 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Lady in the park

    Hi! I really like the idea of this piece, though it's a tad bit cliche, especially in the beginning. There are some sentence fragments and other grammatical errors scattered here ...

    Oct 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Numbers

    Thank you, all! The disconnection is intentional, to symbolize kind a Cartesian duality where the anoretic doesn't necessarily feel a big connection to her own body, and the monotony of ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Goodbye

    Thank you guys for the excellent reviews! I had experimented a bit with different words for both the title and the ending. "Good-bye" sort of slipped my mind. I think ...

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The earth that was

    Oh, okay :) I didn't know there were more parts. I'm sure this would make much more sense if I had read the other parts :P Also, same for me. ...

    May 25, 2011


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