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Re: My Child
Thank you! I've never thought of it in that way. It's really interesting to hear what others think. Did you see anything/would you like to share anything that I could, ...
Oct 5, 2012 -
Re: Lady in the park
Hi! I really like the idea of this piece, though it's a tad bit cliche, especially in the beginning. There are some sentence fragments and other grammatical errors scattered here ...
Oct 5, 2012 -
Re: Numbers
Thank you, all! The disconnection is intentional, to symbolize kind a Cartesian duality where the anoretic doesn't necessarily feel a big connection to her own body, and the monotony of ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
Thank you guys for the excellent reviews! I had experimented a bit with different words for both the title and the ending. "Good-bye" sort of slipped my mind. I think ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: The earth that was
Oh, okay :) I didn't know there were more parts. I'm sure this would make much more sense if I had read the other parts :P Also, same for me. ...
May 25, 2011
