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Forgive my assumption. It is the natural flow to assume male when unsure in the English language, and it felt odd calling any living creature "it", so I hoped for ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! Your feedback was absolutely fantastic. I'm honestly glad for a few of those nitpicky things when people point them out. Sometimes the little things ...

Chapter one is uploaded now! I hope to see your thoughts in a review on it soon!

Chapter one is finally up! I hope to see your thoughts in a review on it soon!

I have absolutely no idea, to be honest. You mentioned seeing "magic-kind" (so without the k) in your review. I didn't see that specifically anywhere, but I'll check again. Due ...

Also! I don't see anywhere that has Magic-kind instead of Magick-kind. Is there any chance you could point this spot out to me?

Thank you so much for your review! I greatly appriciate all of the helpful advice here, and I'll definitely look at this when I edit this Prologue. The first chapter ...

Oh my, thank you so much for your review! That's all very helpful, and I'll be sure to adjust it as soon as I can. You're right about almost everything ...

Thank you! I'll be eagerly awaiting your thoughts on the other chapters, and I do hope you'll take the time to review them.

You should definitely do a full story for it! :-)

Just trying to help! :-) If you want to do it with a different tale, I suggest Beauty and the Beast or Robin Hood. They'd be pretty good to do ...

Guy from this chapter= not the one from chapter one. Trust me, there isn't much good about the Guardian Angels. You find out soon enough. Thanks for the review! I ...

I've created a very special world of my own for this story and others to come. I think you'll find my version of "Angels" to be quite a bit different.. ...

Thank you for the review, and I'll definitely fix that!

I have no improvements I can tell you. I hope to see more from you like this. I haven't looked at your other works yet, so I don't know how ...