Silberfee

Thank you for the review! I didn't expect it to be good because I haven't written a proper story for ages and I always thought that character development would be ...

Its fine I already asked a friend of mine about the aphorisms but thank you for the offer :)

Thank you so much for the feedback. I'll reread it again and see whether there is any commas I can edit .

I also apologise for calling you defensive it was irrelevant and wrong of me. I just let my feelings get in the way at the heat of the moment.

Also I haven't figured how to make quote references ( like you just did when pasting your context) so I apologise for my vagueness ...I just joined this site a ...

Sorry it's my fault!! I thought I wrote could you pm me the pinyin ...but I reread my message and I actually implied I would pm you.

You misunderstood me. -I thought the poem was about lovers because you kept on using 'I' but I wasn't sure -I never said the poem was about loss of ability ...

ah nah. Everyone has to start somewhere and at first it is never good but with practice true art will blossom. People often forget what it feels like to start. ...

Will Pm you later

Yes that is the same with me I got an E in biology (just looked at your profile you live in the UK like me) but when I left school ...

Of course:) I will also appreciate your feedback on my writings.

|Thank you for taking the time to write a detailed analysis :D I will definitely take your idea for stanza structure into account perhaps it will make reading easier. In ...

That thought didn't occur to me, but it is a good idea. I'll rewrite the poem using your suggestion. Thank you:)

Hi SkytheMeister! Thanks so much for the review! I did consider adding details about Jake but I thought it might be irrelevant to the purpose of the poem, and there ...

Thank you for the feedback! Yes I wasn't sure whether to write 'corridor' or 'textiles/food corridor.' I really wanted to keep calling it 'textiles/food corridor' because that is how I ...