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Wahhh. I thought you were going to send this to me *pout* Oh, well, whatever. Okay, so first things first this is rushed. You could fit in a good six ...

Inspired by Beautidul Creatures I stood in the middle of the storm, wind whipping the tattered ends of my dress furiously around me, the dark fabric lashing out like a ...

Wow. Just . . . wow. This was awesome. Amazing. Soo incredibly good. I feel like i'm reading a book i got out of the library, not something someone posted ...

Tick, tick, tick. The frail old man stares, waiting, at the clock. The hand moves slowly, taunting him I love this sentence. . It is saying, “Time is against you, ...

Hi!! I just love the idea behind this!!! I Am the Girl of the Moon I lie back on my crescent hammock As it drifts on through the sky, Swung ...

[flash=][/flash] Just wondering, what is this supposed to be? I would really prefer friends not to tell secrets that are personal and important , but , having friends who love ...

Oooh, I really liked this! Very bitter and dramatic. I do have a few critiques. The slip of your tonge It's spelled 'tongue', and I think you should add some ...

Awesome, Nixy!! Me thinks i know what the inspiration for this is :) I love the part 'I am banished to this boulevard, the Boulevard of Broken Dreams' !!! I ...

Heya, Alzora!!! You already know i love this, and i don't feel like going into total edit-out mode right now, so i'm just going to say this was great and ...

Wow. This is sooooooooooooooooooooo good! I loved it!!!! i'm not going to go into total edit-out mode, as i see other have already done that :) I totally think you ...

wow, this was really amazing. Tell me if you post any more. Prologue. Once upon a time there was a story that did not end in a "happily ever after". ...

I really liked this. I have a few critiques and comments: *The point of view was a little weird; sometimes it was first person, and sometimes it was second person. ...

Wow. This is the best thing I've read on here today. I loved the cliffhanger on the end. I love how there is almost no information about the MC, but ...

I really like this, and i think it sounds like the beginning of something. Maybe you should add on to it. Also, i don't get how the beginning of it ...

All my critiques and nitpicks and comments are going to be in bold. I lay beside the man I've been blessed with and turn so my abdomen, large with child ...