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Re: The Search Begins
This was a gripping story. I admire the thought that went into the construction of such a detailed world. The descriptions were also sublime. In particular, I thought that the ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: Reading
Wow your work was just amazing.You have so nicely described about your sadness at the ending of a book.I myself felt the same when the book Da vinci code was ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: First Verse: The Meeting
Before we get into that, though, I want to give you a warm welcome to the YWS forum. I haven't actually seen you around up until now, but you've definitely ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: 3 am Art
Okay! I officially love this poem, it's cute, it has a nice consistent rhyme and rhythm which I love, the message is clear, it tells a story, and it's descriptive. ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: Syfian - Chapter One
Hey, I'm going to go my best with this one because I'm on my phone; my computer is broken at the moment. So first things first this was great. I ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: morning has wrung out her sleeves
Oh just superb!!!
Jun 23, 2016 -
Re: Temple Run
This is absolutely beautiful! I love how you personify the words to make the emotions of the message more noticeable, and I love the way you also described the place ...
Jun 20, 2016 -
Re: A Different Shade
This is absolutely beautiful! I love how you personify the words to make the emotions of the message more noticeable, and I love the way you also described the place ...
Jun 20, 2016 -
Re: Pencil Shavings
This was amazing. I don't say that lightly because I don't like poetry usually. It was a little long for a poem though, so I almost stopped reading it but ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: Baru
This was amazing. I don't say that lightly because I don't like poetry usually. It was a little long for a poem though, so I almost stopped reading it but ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: Dear
This was amazing. I don't say that lightly because I don't like poetry usually. It was a little long for a poem though, so I almost stopped reading it but ...
May 17, 2016
