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Re: What the moon is made of...
Wow !! Hai SparksOfDoubt I Really Do Love These Lyrics!! Your Amazing Describing And Emotions Are So Beautiful!! I Think my Favourite Verse Is "It's made out of the tears ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Self Devastation.
Hiya Katie xoxo Um First Of All I Like Your Use Of Descriptive Words That Fit In With The Sentences ,I Also Think My Favourite Verse Is .. "It’s hard ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Where the Children Live
Hello there, If you were planning on writing a poem for halloween I for one think that you have achieved that goal ;3 When you read the poem its sends ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: love poem
Hello there, I can understand the story line behind this poem and thought that you expressed the story well ;3 However there were some things that I would change... - ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Can't Leave
Hello there, My first impressions of this poem was the odd layout! I'm not much of a poet ... yet .... But if you did that on purpose then it ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Call Of The Wind
Hello xox Lorna I Think Your Use Of Drawing The Reader In Is BRILLIANT !! Your Gift For Writing Is Incredible :D I Love Your Heart Warming Story Of A ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: A Game of Hearts, Part 1
Hello Im Sian xox Um I Am Very Impressed With Your Use Of Descriptive Words And Catching Verses Of Your Dramatic Poem. It Gave Me Quite A Warm Feeling Like ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Eternal Night
Hey Lorna :) Your BestFriend Sian Here Hehe
Oct 29, 2011