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Alright, here we go. -Rolls up sleeves- Ultimately, I liked this piece. It wasn't your classic "I'm watching this amazing guy out of the corner of my eye and he's ...

Ahah, sweet ending. This was incredibly well written, and you certainly have a flair for comedy. I guess my biggest crit would be that this moves a bit fast. The ...

Neither do I. Maybe it's a Canadian thing...? lol No seriously, I like this. It's funny. My only complaint is, don't you have to make a hoola hoop go really ...

Yes, you are wise. And very eloquent. On a literal level, this was beautifully written. With phrases such as " nights spent dancing through warm subtropical streets, kisses of steel ...

This was a little... uhm. Sweet for my taste. I may be bitter from one failed relationship after another--things (realistically) almost never work out as perfect and wonderful as they ...

This was pretty good. Brilliant explanation of the room was preserved, how things were left after the apocolypse. I liked that, in addition to describing the room, you also developed ...

Ahh, and unfinished ending! Where's the rest of the last sentence? At first, I thought this was going to be a Harvest Moon fanfic (are you familiar with it?), seeing ...

As a rant, this was perfect. As a story, however, I felt that this was... lacking, somehow. Charlie and Gwennan, from your description, sound like they're from two completely different ...

Wow, I loved this. The plot is an intricate weave of emotion, the writing is breathtakingly real. The first and second sections were my favorites. The description of the smell ...

The beginning stanza hooked me. Needless to say, it was wonderful. The bulk of the poem was well written too. Loved the stabbing of eggs and greasy pizza imagery, to ...

This is a great idea, a great concept. However, the ending line isn't clear, which leads to a great disappointment and overall, a misunderstanding of the story. To answer your ...

Wow, I loved this. I'm not very knowledgeable about poetry, but I can tell when an author is clever. And indeed, you were--both with the title and the images in ...

Hm, I liked this. It was nice and simple: a dark night, a warm tavern, a man and his daughter, and a mysterious stranger. Great description and well written dialogue, ...

Ahah, this was good! I really liked the caste system of tea cups, brilliant idea. It truly was a metaphor for life, if you think about it. Because although we ...

Ah, so Snoink finally posted a short story, I see! I liked this very much. At first, I didn't really see what the entire purpose of Alyssa looking at the ...