Shreksurmum

I loved this as much as everyone else. i really like the way you destroy the whole idea of a wicked stepmother, she's actuallly trying to help. although there was ...

This was very good, i found few grammar mistakes, one thing i thought you could improve on was the bird and the cup. i thought that the cup was oscar ...

this was OK, but there was alot of grammar mistakes, and in words like wasn't why do you keep putting two t's? the idea is good, i like the whole ...

bad things now good things later I had, had it made especially for you, before I passed away. Is she speakin from the dead?? never ever leave it lying around ...

first of all, i really liked the way you used characters in this, the whole cancelling each other out thing, anyway on to the crit They had to be lit ...

swaying with the gently summer breeze swaying with the GENTLE summer breeze make sure it makes sense to you before you submit singing until there lungs exploded a bit far ...

this was good, i like the idea of a man talling the story of his past, but there was room for imporvement. im not going into some 5 hour long ...

this was good, but there was ALOT of grammar mistakes and badly spelt words or words missed out e.t.c. before you put the stuff on, read it through to make ...

i liked this, i was pulled into the story and i liked the plot, also now grammar mistakes! there is one thing i want to critique though, make sure you ...

i really liked this, your a great writer and a great poet as well! i like the plot and everything about the story. now for the critque He appeared to ...

this was good, i really liked it! but unforuently there was a few grammar mistakes and there was something i noteiced... Arthur began to argue but reconsidered when rex towered ...

i liked this, not much was bad about it and i would like to here more of this, my only problem was The two embraced in the dark room, her ...

i liked this, but u got a bit confused, i dont think you explained enough. you say that Perosk picked up the gun and aimed it at this guy, and ...

this was a really good short story, the action was good and so was the dialogue. i really enjoyed reading this, but anyway, now for the critique i noticed that ...

I really liked this, the language was good and i cant wait to read the rest of the chapter. now for the critism, your description and use of words was ...