ShokoAkaMatsube

thank you for reviewing!

Yooo the title was interesting so I clicked on it, no dissapointment reading this at all. Maybe a little nitpicky here, but since this is Elisa's origin, I feel like ...

ahhhh my typo on glass im sorry about that Thanks for feedback :)

This poem is nice, and the message of self love (or at least i hope its self love) is a good concept! Though it is a really difficult to figure ...

Oooh! This is a nice story, if I dont forget I will defintely come back to this and read everything previously. Also gacha club? Pretty rare ngl, keep going gurl/boi! ...

This is my first time commenting, but this is a very nice story! Keep going :)