Shinrai

Wow that was heavy but I can connect on so many levels (even though I'm a guy) I really understand the feeling of how some place you used to enjoy ...

I like the idea but I'm not really sure I like the delivery but that could just be personal preference although i do think you made one mistake here. But ...

hmmm.... To be honest this confused me I wish you would have been able to explain it more. I'm the type of person that needs more explanation to understand completely ...

This is good! I liked the descriptiveness and I slowly put together the scene in my head! I wish it was longer though this small tid-bit has so much more ...

I liked the story you seem well read on your Halo back story. Anyways I did see a few places for Improvement “Sergeant, these men, and this lady here”, the ...

"Courage! Strength! Faith! In the sword maker, in the One who gave me breath to fight, to live, to love. " Tis my favorite part ... i really like the ...

I liked it it was kinda short though... "foolishly I opened my gate and it won’t close until the rust on the other is gone" I liked the part about ...

I really liked the images this put in my head from the way you said things "If I were to offer sky, and moon and dark so true, would you ...

the end was better than the first part but I still enjoyed it it was short and sweet and i really liked this bit "A testament to its role It ...

I liked this but my favorite part had to be the end "Doing what the Sky can't. Using her, To bring light To the world." that was just brilliant not ...

As I began this I'm gunna be honest I didn't think I would like this but the ending was what made it really good when you said "Cheers to the ...

I think you could improve your intro a little I'm sure you could come up with some good descriptive words and analogies that would suit you I don't really want ...

Wow I really liked this the flow of it kept me reading and wanting more this was so good You sit and laugh, As I hit the floor, My world ...

This video was amazing I've had a YouTube account and only have about 20 videos favorited but this one makes it onto that list I don't know how I missed ...