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Well translating your experience to a poem was definately a praisable idea. I like the rythem of the poem,and it was a bit funny ofcourse. Liked it,Keep writing.

Hmm...another good piece of work. I hardly have anything in ur poem to criticize about. They(ur poems) are wonderful. Good job.

I think this was fantastic, also the rhyming worked well. Well done! Would like to see more of ur works. And also Welcome to Yws.

That was good but as u know it needs a bit of work on it. Keep writing!

Well written...

This Remix is definately good. With lots of emotions and feelings it worked well.

Yeah definately good.

Ah this was fantastic,Well done!

Pretty good,would have liked to see more of it. The second paragraph was a bit unexplainable,and confusing. Keep writing.

Hey lexy! This flow of the poem is really good,though some places I felt are confusing.Or may be I couldn't get it. Any way in all Well done!Keep writing. -Ani.

Unique!

That was good, You tried to express a lot through this small poem.Well done.

Hey Vamp this was really good,Well done! :)

It would have helped if it would have been more elaborate. Though short and simple in always good,well done!

This was good,and the flow was nice too.