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Re: "Four"
Well translating your experience to a poem was definately a praisable idea. I like the rythem of the poem,and it was a bit funny ofcourse. Liked it,Keep writing.
Oct 13, 2006 -
Re: Secret Storm by Mark Worger
Hmm...another good piece of work. I hardly have anything in ur poem to criticize about. They(ur poems) are wonderful. Good job.
Oct 11, 2006 -
Re: An Award winning poem by Mark Worger
I think this was fantastic, also the rhyming worked well. Well done! Would like to see more of ur works. And also Welcome to Yws.
Oct 11, 2006 -
Re: Every Last
That was good but as u know it needs a bit of work on it. Keep writing!
Oct 11, 2006 -
Re: A Thousand Mirrors
Well written...
Oct 11, 2006 -
Re: Remix of an older poem
This Remix is definately good. With lots of emotions and feelings it worked well.
Oct 11, 2006 -
Re: Acrostic
Yeah definately good.
Oct 11, 2006 -
Re: A girls cry
Ah this was fantastic,Well done!
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: Life is a picture
Pretty good,would have liked to see more of it. The second paragraph was a bit unexplainable,and confusing. Keep writing.
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: A place in the sun
Hey lexy! This flow of the poem is really good,though some places I felt are confusing.Or may be I couldn't get it. Any way in all Well done!Keep writing. -Ani.
Oct 10, 2006 -
Re: Sub
Unique!
Oct 9, 2006 -
Re: Sunbathing
That was good, You tried to express a lot through this small poem.Well done.
Oct 9, 2006 -
Re: Is It Real?
Hey Vamp this was really good,Well done! :)
Oct 9, 2006 -
Re: The beauty of the Heavens
It would have helped if it would have been more elaborate. Though short and simple in always good,well done!
Oct 7, 2006 -
Re: Throwaway Lines
This was good,and the flow was nice too.
Oct 6, 2006