Published October 5, 2006
Here I lay, looking upwards,
What a glorious sight to behold.
The eternal beauty of the Vast heavens,
looking down on me.
This forgotten beauty will always be with me.
I think of the god of heaven and Earth, and I know,
That one day I will be dancing on the stars with you,
lost in the eternal beauty, and bound eternally with love.
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It would have helped if it would have been more elaborate.
Though short and simple in always good,well done!