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Re: Epiphany
Good poem, expresses feelings most of us are too afraid to. The voice is very good, since almost no one uses slang, making it unique. 5/5
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Can you?
sorry if it isn't great, first poem.
May 15, 2010 -
Re: To Myself When I Become 33
it was deep. I hate to ruin the deep feeling, but how can you write this poem if you are dead??
May 15, 2010 -
Re: What has become of this Land?
Yeah, we need to fix earth if we want to survive.
May 15, 2010 -
Re: The Battle with Perseus
... that was long... good description.
May 15, 2010 -
Re: A passive-aggressive sestina, whooooooo
...whoa... very deep, and sad.
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Witchery
That was so deep it hurt my head.
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Wounded chapter three
That was touching, but who puuts stickers on dogs?!?!?!?
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Project Mystis Scene 4
...wow...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Love is Like the Rain!
That was touching, and, another emotion undescribable. 9|10 stars! A little too sad...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Begin Again
I like it, kind of sad...
May 13, 2010