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Sherri

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: "Goodbye"

    Thank you so much! :D And that's a very good idea; I'll do that!

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: "Goodbye"

    Thanks Rascalover :) I'll reformat if I can; I think there are limitations to the yws formatting, but I'll check again! And I suppose it would look better with a ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Anticlimactic Monochrome Scenery ||| Break My Heart: Burned Edition

    Hi Alliyah! This is actually my first time writing a true story, to be honest. XD I know it's not the best. The reason for the abnormal focus on seemingly ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Anticlimactic Monochrome Scenery ||| Break My Heart: Burned Edition

    Hello Despondence!! I absolutely adore your username :D Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it :) I know this chapter is very short XD I plan on fixing ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Anticlimactic Monochrome Scenery ||| Cancer Didn't Kill Her: Questionable Friends

    Hello, Meandbooks! So this is the second chapter; the book is going to go from a friend's view, to her view, to another view repeatedly to get the full-circle of ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Cold Hearted -- Chapter 2

    Ah, I forgot to reply to this, but I actually hadn't thought of this tip, and it helped immensely with future chapters I had been writing. Thank you so much!! ...

    Nov 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Not enough

    Not a problem at all :)

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Cold Hearted -- Chapter 2

    Hi again, Muddy! (Can I call you Muddy?) Thanks for reviewing! So this chapter is written from another PoV than the first; we'll go back to the original PoV in ...

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Cold Hearted -- Chapter 2

    Hello Myth!! Thank you so much for reviewing!! It really helps! :D Okay, so the PoV does change! I couldn't get the chapter to come out good enough when writing ...

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Cold Hearted -- Chapter 1

    Hi Kathryn! Thank you so much for reviewing; I really appreciate it. Yeah, there's a pretty fine line between too much detail and not enough. XD I can never quite ...

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Cold Hearted -- Chapter 1

    Hello Mr. MuddyPig! Thank you for reviewing! So, I'm not sure where you're from, but a common joke between a friend and I is the 'they said' chain. Like... Oh! ...

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Over the Hills and Far Away (Over The Hills: Part 1 of 3)

    Hi, Dracula! Thanks for reviewing; I really appreciate it. :) (Hopefully my mind didn't seem too strange; from past experience, you can tell a lot about a person from their ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Coldware (Part 1: Software) -- Chapter Ten

    Thank you for the review, PiesAreSquared! I appreciate the criticism. I'm trying to work on my muddled sentence structures, poor word distribution, and overall flowery-ness. It's sort of hard to ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Coldware (Part 1: Software) -- Chapter Nine (Rough Version)

    Hi Chaser!! Thanks so much for reviewing; it really helps and I appreciate it BUNCHES :D I need all the help I can get XD I know DL sounds really ...

    Aug 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Coldware (Part 1: Software) -- Chapter Nine (Rough Version)

    I'm replying to this very late, and I apologize for that!! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review; I really do appreciate it! :D Yeah, ...

    Aug 3, 2015


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