SheepMonoxide

Thankyou for all of your advice so far, you're all so helpful ! xD Please comment review, etc.I LOVE YOUX Preface Preface He felt a warm, yet deadly breath on ...

Well, the story begins in the house of Aiden Wright. A normal teenage boy, with an ordinary life. Well, moderately ordinary. Unless you counted that his mother was a single ...

Please comment, review. I need help ! ^o^ She felt as if a terrible monster with long claws was slashing at her skin constantly, digging deeper into her flesh until ...

I was bored. Please review and stuff, rip it apart ! Be as cruel as you like ! xD] Rhiannon lunged into her bathroom at full speed. She couldn't handle ...

Ahh! This is just something that came to me on a dreary, rainy day. Do what you want with it, I need constructive critism! I wanna get it waaaaaay better. ...

I don't know whether this would count as a proper poem? It's the first I've ever wrote and I'm not that familiar with how Stanzas work and all that. So ...

[Rip it apart. Be as harsh as you like)Limp, lifeless, lonely, the muddy green material specked with dirt, debris and crimson. A mystery, lying in the dark, damp dirt; shouting ...

Twisted BeginingsPrologueChrisWinding her wonderful hair with care and precision behind her head, blue eyes gazing ahead through the small window, the sunset right ahead seen from our Honey Moon suit ...

Just a little poem that came to mind as I watched The Boy in Striped Pajamas. Thinking about extending it if anyone thinks it's any good so far. Any criticism ...

The sequal to I Don't Love Your Dad Anymore :)

Just a short rambling story about my own experience of losing religion. Rip it apart with your nitpicks and criticisms if you like, I need all the help I can ...