Shearwater

Hi Kaylay! Pink here. I'm going to review this promising looking piece here. First off, I think you should try to break these paragraphs up. They're too cramped up and ...

Hello Captain! (tries not to think of Jack Sparrow*) Call me Pink, I'm here to do a review! So let's start. First, a few nit-picks. who owned the greatest bar ...

Hi there! Since most of the nit-picks have been, well, picked. I'm just going to give you some tips and review your writing overall. Okay, from the very beginning you ...

Hi Jayleigh! Here to review chapter five. So let's begin. His eyes were grey but the way he was looking at me, with calmness and curiosity. But the way he ...

Hello EmiAnne I'm not going to nitpick, since that's already been done. I'm just here to give you a few tips that might help out next time. Firstly, this is ...

Hello Katharsis, Pink here. Let me start by just saying how wonderful this piece is. You had me laughing so many times. I enjoyed this tremendously. I can't really nitpick ...

Hi there lantol, Pink here, I'll review this nice looking piece for you today. Just a few nitpicks in the beginning. “not today “and stared at me for a moment ...

Hey Jayliegh! Since you need help in picking one, I'll give you my opinion, Warren. I think Foster's more dark while Warren gives out an innocent light. [except for that ...

Hey there Jayleigh, I'm here to review this one too! So let's begin... -brown tousled hair, and casual clothes- I don't think there's a need for the comma before and. ...

Okay at first I was thinking that she was waking up with Jacob and they were married. But then [oh god] Mike Newton, of all people, was her husband. I ...

Hey there Jayleigh! thanks for the PM, I'll definitely review this chapter for you too! So let's get started. “How could one truly know if they like curvy or square ...

Hi Jayleigh, I'll be reviewing you for today. “What are you doing after school?” The voice belonged to Warren, the new student that sat in front of me in history. ...

This is...awesome. It's like a modern day twist on the classic tale. I especially like the way you wrote this, it's got Aurora's personality. I can feel her emotions when ...

Wow this is totally different than what I had imagined when I read the title. I thought I was reading something different. Although it's good in an odd way. It's ...