Shearwater

Hi, The fist thing I thought of when I read the title was "come on, come on" because in my language that's what "aja, aja" means. So I obeyed and ...

Hello there, Pink here, as requested :D Alright so let's get down to the dirty stuff first. Nitpicks I got myself wearing a striped, black and white, long sleeved polo ...

Hey *Coco. I've finished reading all of your chapters and I've got to say, I've heard some this before. It sounds a little bit like "The Duchess" (If you have ...

Hi Coco, it's me again. Well there isn't much that I can possibly say about this chapter, I was rather 'sucked into' the storyline and forgot to check for any ...

Hey Coco, it's me again. the centre of the room is this supposed to 'center'? As others began to join the dance with their spouses I think it's 'begun' because ...

Hey Coco, Pink here! So let's begin with this new chapter, Although it was beautiful to look at, it weighed a tonne. Alright, I think 'tonne' is a bad word ...

Hi Coco, Pink here. Another review! :) First of all, I think you jumped from the ball to this conversation a bit fast. I was actually looking forward to a ...

Hi Coco, Pink here, as requested. I just have a few nitpicks I would like to get out of the way first, before I say anything else about this piece. ...

Hi Night owl, this is Pink. Firstly I think you've created a very interesting setup here. Devil in high school, and a girl to begin with, it's amazing. I love ...

Hi *Coco, Pink here, as requested. So I've read your chapter and there's only one thing I'd really like to point out. Your wording in a few sentences is a ...

Hey Jayleigh, here to review! Nitpicks “Not exactly.” He paused. comma after exactly, you really don't need to separate those sentences. His hand slipped from my hair and my head ...

Hey, Pink here! First of all, welcome to YWS! (hope you like it here). So I'm going to review this short piece for you today. First thing I noticed was ...

Hey Tanya, I'm here to review (no duh) Alright, let's get started on this one. Nitpicks “Rhee, Dad had a vision before . . . vanishing,” Drake spoke softly, “he ...

*Phew* I made it! Alright, just one nitpick... and whatever filth covering the surface. I think you should put 'is' after filth. _____________ I love this, jayleigh, I really do. ...

Hey Jayleigh! (Arr, I always mix up the 'e' and 'i'!) Okay, heads up, this review is going to suck so be prepared. Oh my, you're already on Chapter eleven! ...