Shearwater

Hey, Whisper! It is I, again. Here to review the next chapter. Okay, I'm sorry but I can't help myself. I must nit-pick! Don't worry, it's not much ;) You ...

Hello! Pink here, (hey, you're a Pink too! that's pretty awesome) Anyway, you asked for a review so here it is. Now I don't see much I need to nitpick ...

Hello Whisper, I am here, like I said I would be :) So I kinda just skipped the review for the first chapter because, well, everything had already been pointed ...

Hi Austenite, Pink here! Alright, I've read your first chapter but I didn't post anything because everything I wanted to say had already been said. So I'll review the second ...

Hello, Vampyre! (plz tell me you don't sparkle 0.0) Haha, just kidding. Anyways, Pink here, dropping by to do a review :) Shall we get started? “I’d just had another ...

Ello' and welcome to YWS. I, right here, is Pink and I'll be doing a review for you :) Let's begin! Vanessa Griffin packed her plaid messenger bag slowly. Notebooks, ...

Hi Allison, Pink here, dropping by do a review. First of all welcome to YWS! :D I hope you have a good time here! Secondly, I'm going to review this ...

Hey Sheperd, Pink here, dropping by to do a review :) "What the hell?" I groan to myself. I ached from every inch of my body. Um, it should be ...

Hi Chanson, I have to say, I really love this piece. It's so beautifully written and it connects to the reader almost instantly. I also love the very first sentence ...

Hey Hawk, I read your first chapter but didn't post anything because...well my review would've been pointless. I really like what you have so far, it's easily progressing and it ...

Hey there! I peered over the top of my coffee out the window, trying to look casual and inconspicuous, and jumped a little, choking and spilling a hot latte all ...

Hey Tanya! Thanks for the pm, I are here to review :) So I didn't read the previous reviews so I'm sorry if any of this is repeated. Maya ran, ...

Hi Jemo, Pink here, dropping by to do a short review :) He loves being with his buddies every Summer, doing all the stuffs they enjoy I would substitute stuffs ...

Hey there, I'm Pink and here to do a short review for this piece. Okay every time you mentioned jinglio or jinex or jingley or whatever, I couldn't control myself, ...

Hey, Addawen, it's Pink. I saw you posted something and decided to drop by and do a review :) Alright so I have just a few nitpicks... “Princess, all is ...