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Shearwater

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Spirit Boy: Chapter One

    Hey, Sprite :) Pink here, dropping by for a review! Nitpicks “Artem? Won’t you play with me?” I grimaced, but I did not reply. I wanted her to be gone, ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A shot of Arrogance (Chapter Three)

    Hey, Skins! Alright, so I started this review yesterday but got caught up in a couple other reviews that needed some last minute critiques. Thus, I just saved this and ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: [September Contest] Poor Mr. Diggs

    Hiya! Here to review! I know it's late but I still wanted to do one, even though I'm terrible with poetry. It's just hard for me to write...but! I will ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [September Contest] Wicked

    Hey Mirrorgal, Pink here! Thanks for the request :) So, I'll do my best to finish this, although I'm not sure about the poem. I have work tomorrow and I ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [September Contest] Spaceman

    Hey Kiwi :D Don't worry about the time, I'm free right now so might as well, right? ;) Alright, on to the review! The rationalist inside him knew that it ...

    Sep 19, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: [September Contest] SNAFU

    Hey, Jai! Thanks for the request, and no, I'm a YWSoholic so I will always have time to review! :D By the way, this review is going to be quite ...

    Sep 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: E's Diary - Prologue Part 1 - To Meet...

    Hey Roal, Pink here! Thanks for the request! So, honestly, you have a pretty big piece here so my first instinct would be to tell you to cut this into ...

    Sep 19, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [September Contest] The Artist

    Hey Wario! (love the username by the way) Pink here, thanks for the request. I figured I might as well review it ASAP since it's almost the 19th and isn't ...

    Sep 19, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [September Contest] Character Study (revised)

    Hey Lyn! Oh, thanks for calling me a reviewing machine :) I kinda like that. lol Oh, I remember you from chat too! Now, thanks for the request, I'll review, ...

    Sep 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A shot of Arrogance (Chapter Two)

    Hey Skins, I was actually going to do this review yesterday but I was so tired that my brain could not function correctly. :( But, today's a new day. I ...

    Sep 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Light and Shadow - Prologue and Chapter 1

    Hey Whisper, thanks for the request! So, first I'll go ahead and nitpick a little :) I know that's your favorite lol. Yet, these twins were born. Eluna and Xombreil ...

    Sep 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter One - Old)

    Yo, Skins. So, super thanks for the request. This'll keep me busy haha. Anyways, first of all, I'm going to try to get these reviews done at least once a ...

    Sep 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Perfect Devil: Chapter 1

    Hey, Pal XD Pink here, dropping by for a review! So, let's get crackin' shall we? I'll start off with everyone's favorite, Nitpicks. Nitpicks he’d been to be honest a ...

    Sep 16, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Sky Sailing

    Hi Dawn, Pink here :) I peeled the plastic wrapper off my chocolate bar and took a bite, it was extravagant, I felt as if a parade were going on ...

    Sep 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Hard to Handle Part 2

    Hi Ren, back for more! Alright, so I'm not really going to nitpick this time, mostly I'm going to point out a few things here and there which I noticed. ...

    Sep 15, 2010


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— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein