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Shearwater

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chatper 1: Junior Year

    Hi! Pink here, for a review! Isaiah was an annoyance to me. For some reason he'd been in my English class Sophomore year and now, my Junior year, I imagined ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Poem That Got Me a Date to Homecoming

    Hi! Pink here :) So I've read this before and I think it was sweet and short. I mean, I wish a guy wrote me a poem haha. I think ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Better To Have Loved And Lost?

    Hey Light, Pink here! So I've read your piece and I think I love it. I mean, the bitterness to it was astounding and you kept your voice clean and ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Lie of a Normal Life

    Hi Quill, Pink here :) So, I actually liked this piece, it was nicely written and I did enjoy how you connected everything through the little lie that she been ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cross Your Heart (One-shot)

    Hey Wicked! Pink here, dropping by to do a short review. So, I think you had a good idea here. I mean there were minor mistakes but I won't point ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Fire

    Hi Pink here! I'll be reviewing your work today :D Fires long to consume. They rage and ravage, burning whatever encounters their path, transforming it into ash and embers and ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love, The Boy Above...

    Hey Books! Here to review! Super speedy one though, hope you don't mind :) So I'm not going to nitpick since it's been done and I don't feel like doing ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Definition of Love

    Alrighty, Jalmoc :D Nitpicks It seemed like a normal day in Plymouth, IN. I would use the whole name of the state instead of just the initials. “Bubby, time to ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Murder Can Write 2/2 (a two-part story)

    Hey! Pink here, again :) Nitpicks Its shrill and raspy voice had snapped me out of my petrified state. I think it should be "it's" A human being in miniature, ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Murder Can Write 1/2 (a two-part story)

    Hola! Pink here :) So I'll be reviewing this, hope you don't mind. Nitpicks TUESDAY. 1:20PM. That particular Manila afternoon was killing me. The rainy season was supposed to have ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Aren: Guardian Angel

    Hi baywolf! So first of all I want to compliment you on the turn of the word 'angel' here. Describing them as aliens was quite funny and I liked the ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: [Cool title goes here]

    Hi Kel, Pink here! Review sunday means review, review so that's what I'm here to do. ;) You said criticism...so... Nitpicks "Oh come on Will" said Jack as they marched ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Nine)

    Since it's review Sunday, I might as well go all out, eh? So, here we go! Youv'e just got to do what's right, okay? I say we burn typos alive. ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Eight ~ Part Two)

    Hey Skins! Pink here! “These ones are mingin’ though,” he shrugged. “yours are way nicer.” You're missing a capitalization here. 'Yours are way nicer." “For being a complete knob and ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alone into the Night

    Hi Wicked! Pink here :) Here to do a quick review for this short piece, hope you don't mind ;) My fiancée, James, always refused to come to the bar ...

    Sep 26, 2010


Sometimes I'm terrified of my heart; of its constant hunger for whatever it is it wants. The way it stops and starts.
— Poe