Shearwater

Hey Rayne! Pink here :) Nitpicks/Comments Cold. I remember it was cold. I was walking along the only beach in my town, Fallen Leaf. People think that everyplace in California ...

Hey, Puppets! I'm super sorry I'm late. But yeah, you know I'm doing NaNo and have a short attention span. However, I am here and I'm ready to do this ...

Hey Someone, Pink here! Welcome to YWS! I won't do a line by line but I will point out a few things that I think you should address or work ...

Oy, Tiger! Sup. Nitpicks/suggestions “Yes, I thought it was Mortimer. I think I’ll call you Morty. For short. Tell me Patch appears as some random character in here too! 8D ...

Hey, Coral! First of all, heads up, I'm a terrible poetry reviewer. But I will make an attempt... Okay, the first part was nice. I agree with Gal about the ...

Hey Whisperer! So I'm going to be honest, I have no idea how to properly review this piece for you but I shall do my best, nonetheless. There was a ...

Hey Skins! Told you I would review this sooner or later. I was just behind and had to read chapter fifteen. Anyways, on to the review! Not many nitpicks, being ...

Hey Apps! Pink here, sorry I'm late :) I blame NaNo. The little vampire thing is sucking all my time! Now, I won't go into minor nitpicks and all because ...

Hey Carbon! Don't worry about the request thing, you're free to send me as many as you like. With all honesty, I was looking for something to review but I ...

Wowie, Jash! That was an amazing trailer for your novel. I want one too! D: How did you make it? It's beautiful and it raises suspense and mystery. Hmm, nice. ...

Heya, iG. Thanks for the request, I'm here to review. Victoria was sat at the small coffee table in the living room. Next to her were wax crayons and a ...

Hey, Sprite! Thanks for submitting a piece. Everyone else is slow -___- Anyway, here is your review! First of all, I'm not going to go through an entire nitpicking session ...

Heya! I'm back. Alright, this is going to be a short one. Right now, I think the relationship between Gary and Belle is very odd. I mean, they're best friends, ...

Alright, back for another. The southern sun beat on Gary’s beat. Gary's beat? What beat? heartbeat? To Gary's hearbeat? “Well Belle asked to see him, what was I suppose to ...

Hey there! Here to review ^^ Nice chapter, it was interesting to read. But I can't help but feel how much of a jerk this Jay guy is. But the ...