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Re: Parallel chapter 1
Hey, there! Pink here, I'm here to review for you. I'm sorry for being sorta/kinda late but hopefully that won't stop me from doing a somewhat decent review of this. ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 6)
Kay, Freak - I'm back for the second part of this thing. Again, my review is going to be as helpful as a hundred dollar bill is to a goat. ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 5)
Ohai, Freak. I'm here to review. Yes, I'm totally aware of the fact that I was supposed to review this weeks ago but I only got around to it now. ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Call Me Mr. Ailuro~(1.1)
Hey, Shru!
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Her Unlucky Cup of Coffee
Hey Gheal! I'm here to do a nice quick review for you. .< You taunt me with your excerpts, Gheal! *Shakes fists* Anyway, hopefully this review helped you in some ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Epic Fail
Hello! I'm here to review as requested. And yes, I do remember reviewing for you, unfortunately - I don't remember exactly what it was I reviewed. :c Anyway, I hope ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: A breath of fresh air
Hey! I'm sooo sorry for getting to this really late. I've been mixed up with some other things and forgot about it until just now. But! I'm here to review ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Words That You Whisper (Chapter One)
Nitpicks & Comments “Hey, Twiggy!” Musket walked in his light air was refreshing. He had always been the brother that could make her. This sentence doesn't really make sense. Well, ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: The Tattoo Engineer - 1.1 (Revised)
Hey there! I'm here to review this nice revised chapter of yours. Now, since it's revised there's really not much that I can point out with this so this review ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Finding Perfection.
Hey there, Kagi! I'm here to review for you. ^^ Nitpicks & Comments Kelly O'Brien was surrounded by white and cream dresses hung delicately on smooth hangers. Hung should actually ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Those Times
Hey! You never told me about this one! If you did, then for some unexplainable reason, I never actually saw it. :/ Anyway, I'm glad you PM'd me about it. ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: I need a cigarette (the Remix)
Hi there! Here to review. Now, I'm honestly a pretty terrible poet so my knowledge of poetry is quite limited. I don't really know much about it but I'll still ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: My Guardian Dog 3 - Rewritten!
Hey, Wife! I'm here to review!
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow - Chapter 2
Hey there! I'm here to review! Sorry I forgot about this, I blame the whole team review thingy, seriously. xD Okay, I'll start with just a few nitpicks. Holy scrap! ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Blinding
trying as she's lacing up her sneakers to persuade me to join her I don't really understand this sentence. It isn't my problem, I realize. This is the end. Someone ...
May 2, 2011
