Shearwater

Hey Coco! Please, how could I forget you? I’m glad to see back around the site. I’ve recently returned myself, actually. ;) So let’s get down to the nitty gritty, ...

Hello MrAlwins, I’ll be doing a review for your piece today. Writing: I’m actually liking your style. It’s not bad and I think you definitely have some nice description and ...

Okay... My first initial reaction after I read this was: WHAT is going on. So you get a nice big red check mark next to interesting introduction. This is very ...

Hey Twit, I hadn’t realized how much I actually missed reading about Victor and his grand escapades at playing God. Since I’ve read some of Serpent’s Teeth, it was very ...

Hi Alice! I’m back for this second installment of your wonderful piece. Since I’ve already mentioned a bucket full, not essentially but close to a bucket full of things in ...

Hi Alice! I’m here to review this for you. Like Beck, I found myself enjoying this and I totes agree that it’s unfair you can write so well at this ...

Hi Naturegirl! I’m Shear, I’ll be reviewing this piece. I like to go by segments so bear with me. Writing: Obviously, I enjoyed your writing style. There is something nostalgic ...

Hey Addy, I saw you posted this and decided to review a bit of Romanov. ^^ Writing: In your introduction, you used lots of imagery and description for his dream ...

Hi there! I'm Shear and I shall be reviewing this for you today. :] Writing: I like your description! I think you have a good sense of imagery and can ...

Hey, It's safe to say that I enjoyed this piece. I think you've built a very interesting world - or worlds? There are few things that concern me about this ...

Hello there! This is a pretty short piece but I think it speaks of promises. You have a very interesting idea of this figure which follows your protagonist and makes ...

Hey there, Driver! Welcome to YWS! I'm Shear, your lovely reviewer for the day. :] To start things off, I overall really enjoyed your writing style. You had varied sentences, ...

Hi there! So I think you might be able to flesh out more of this idea of her not wanting to attend college for four years - that seems like ...

Hi, Rydia! I'm sorry for taking a century to get to this. Here I am! Granted, I probably won't have much to say about this piece in particular, I'm terrible ...

They there! Sorry for taking almost an entire year to get to this. I was rather busy with some stuff. Anyway, here is your review, as requested! Firstly, I'm going ...