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Re: Deleted 94
Geez, Lumi. Finally you write something in which I can actually sorta kinda maybe review for you. You know poetry isn't my strength, lad. :3 But I can give your ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Country Boy: Chapter 1, part 3
Hey, Africa! I'm here for the last part of chapter one! ^^ So, again this is a nice chapter with few if any, grammatical errors which I like. However, you ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Weak Tears beneath The Blackest of Skies
Gheal, darling! I'm here to review said excerpt as requested! So, I've really missed your writing and it's great to see you up and in motion again with your novel. ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Country Boy: Chapter 1, Part 2
Okay, part two! Here we go! So, I'm not going to take too long to review this one like I did in the other first chapter because we really don't ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Country Boy: Chapter 1, part 1
Okay! So I decided to review this for you because as mentioned before, I am more powerful in the fiction area rather than the poetry area. Anyway, away we go! ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Television & communication amongst friends and family
Hey there, Mikko! Pink here! I'll be doing a short review for you today. In our modern day society, with the invention and development of new technologies and various examples ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Fruitless Attempts With a Japanese Pen
Gheal! I have not seen you in ages! Are you suffering from writers block? I know how you feel for I've done six tortureous monthes without writing. With that said, ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: The Influences of Grapefruit
Hey there, Brigg! I'm Pink and I'll be doing a review for you today. ^^ Whenever I hear the word ‘grapefruit’ used in a sentence, I immediately think of the ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: My Interview With Loneliness
Okay, Max! I'm here! Sorry for the slight lateness but as you can recall, I've been busy. Now, onward to the review! Firstly, I'd like to say that I do ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Corpse Pile
Hey there, Crow. Pink here, I'll be doing a quick review for you today. I'll be reviewing as I write. The first thing I notice is the emotion in the ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [4]
Hey there! I'm here to review this chapter. Sorry for being kind of late. Anyway, again I enjoyed this chapter. I actually really enjoy the personality you bring out of ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Wings & Freedom
Hi Zanna! Here to review for you! So this will be quick given that your story is also short so I don't have much to comment on. After 15 long ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Jesters (chapter 1)
Hey there, Neon. This review is written as I read. Let's start with your prologue, I thought it was a bit unnecessary and too telly and just not serious at ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: My cliché love story
Hey there, Mikko! I shall try not to be too harsh! We'll start with negatives and move on to positives because I like to get the bad over first. Firstly, ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1
Hey, Jas! I'm here to review! First of all, thank you for giving me something to review. I got this message just when I logged in to find something to ...
Sep 20, 2011