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I would say that you could talk about exactly where he is fighting and have him set directly where WWI was happening. This might give some indication :)

Hey there! Sheadun here to review this story of yours! I'm sure I will enjoy reviewing it as much as you did writing it! Overall, really solid and interesting plot! ...

Hi felistia! I would love to be updated :)

Hi JuliasSneezer! Shea here to review and read your chapter! Nicely done! Found some time to review this story that I have been interested in! I love the plot and ...

Thanks! I love getting feedback and suggestions :) this review is super helpful! Thanks again :)

Hi thomas! Thank you so much! I love hearing this positive feedback :) it's great to hear! Thanks!

Thanks so much Julias! I realized that I didn't actually describe the main character... Haha! Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it :) Thank you! Shea

Ah thank you! I love hearing this feedback :)

Thank you!

Hi Gummy! It's good to know that I have someone steadily reviewing my work! Your information is really helpful and I will work on how Gann is acting :) Thank ...

Oh my gosh this is so nice to hear! I really appreciate your reading it, and am sooooo happy that you like it! I get all of my inspiration by ...

Oh and if you liked my last chapter, I wrote another and put it up :) I know this is probably annoying but I was wondering if you wanted me ...

Wow. This is really super good. I'm more of a novel person than poetry (because I'm sort of awful at writing poems :b), but this is really really good. I ...

I would love to get updates!!! I like to keep up with the stories also :)

Hi FluffyDuckling! Thank you so much for the compliments :) I'm glad you want to keep reading! I always appreciate some good feedback :) Thanks! Shea