Sheadun

Hello MJ! Thanks for your comments! I just wanted to clarify two things. 1.) Ever and Brae are sisters by adoption, as they are both adopted. Although, ari is only ...

Oh and one more note! Lately I have been writing hear instead of here and I really don't know why....I've done it twice this week and I'm confused. Maybe it's ...

Hi MJ! Thanks for the review! I really enjoyed your critiques and will take all of them into consideration :) I've never written about adoption, so I was just hoping ...

Hi Pan! Thanks for your review. I always love when people take their time to delve into my work, and you certainly did! Thank you for all of the comments! ...

Mage, Thank you for the review! Your comments were very helpful. Thanks again, Sheadun

I will! Thanks again Shota! And welcome to yws!

Hello! Thank you for all of the comments! I will definitely take a look at them OH GEEZ. I didn't mean to make it look romantic ! I will most ...

Hi Elijah! Thank you for this review! I'm glad you are enjoying these! Also, I'm sorry about the confusion! Writing historical fiction is so confusing, and this family in particular ...

Thank snow monkey! Glad you like it!

Hi Mj, Thanks for the comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it and will take all of your critiques into consideration! Thanks again, Sheadun

Hi Eli! Thank you so much for the compliments and critiques. It is so nice to have someone loving this story as much as I do! This is actually a ...

Thanks snowmonkey! I'm glad to see someone enjoying it:)

The second part is posted!

Thanks ! Do you want an update when the next part comes out?

Hello Ink, Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm really thankful for the comments for when I revise. This is a first draft, so I will definitely take your comments ...