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Shauna242

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Hate You

    What a great poem. I thought it was relatable. Everyone has been has hated someone so much that they hate just being around them or breathing the same air as ...

    Dec 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Holidays

    What a jolly poem! I loved the rhyme scheme, but I did notice that you went off a little. But, that's okay! The poem still turned out great. I also ...

    Dec 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: The First Time

    This was the most beautiful and relatable poem I've read. I loved your use of vivid imagery. I could picture the passionate moment in my mind so perfectly. I felt ...

    Dec 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The View From My Math Class Window

    I loved this tbh. I enjoyed how you used vivid imagery so that I can picture your surroundings. & I see the deep meaning of this poem. It's very relatable ...

    Nov 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Symphonia

    This was truly a beautiful piece. Your use of figurative language was just amazing. You describing music to a actual human female was so creative and interesting. It was truly ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love is a Game

    This poem was quite creative I loved the part when you said "The hope behind our twisted game, so gamble your heart away." It shows how love and gambling are ...

    Sep 29, 2015


Sometimes I'm terrified of my heart; of its constant hunger for whatever it is it wants. The way it stops and starts.
— Poe