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  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The first betrayal

    thanks

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Too clingy for a one night stand

    hi writer, your poem was lovely and precise.. congratulations. i liked - ends night's poetry. true that. keep writing and reviewing. to review my work,

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The first betrayal

    thank you. my heart does beat faster when i read reviews. thanks for encouraging me and keep reading my work.

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The first betrayal

    hi, thanks for the review. i meant the starting line as going into d past. the poem is of an adult reminiscing about her teenage love she could not forget. ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Destiny

    hi, its small and perfect. you have summarized destiny. kudos to you. do check my 1st poem at- and write a review. keep writing ...

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: v

    hi, i really liked your poem. i could imagine the dark giving way to the sun. i felt that the sync between the feelings you emoted and the description you ...

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The first betrayal

    thanks for your review sbf1102. its my first. first of all, i am glad you liked what i wrote. d mess thing, i meant it as the one huge individual ...

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Bounded by memories

    hi, nice piece.. good luck !

    Sep 26, 2014


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