ShallowHouse

OMG! Thank you so so soooooo much for the feedback! Yes I'll do my best to improve upon your advice, the verb tenses especially! I'm really glad you're enjoying my ...

How do I call using this... @queenofscience hi! Here's the next chapter!

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Yes it is kind of steampunk-ish. I took some ideas from certain animes so it's got lots of anime tropes... As for what they'll ...

Thank you for the review! Yes, it is set in a world War-ish setting and no, it's not the diverse races type of fantasy, sadly. I've already written the first ...

I'm very happy to know you are invested in my story, thank you so much! I felt really embarrassed when I saw your review, scrolled back up and saw the ...

Thank you for the review! I'll totally work on those slow-mo parts and I'll make sure to make more than just three passes on the subsequent chapters. Thank you for ...

Hi, HGsomeone! I love this so much! I love how you start off with an omen- a sign of the end times. I love that despite it happening already, Athanase ...

Thank you so much! I was honestly wondering whether long sentences are a good thing but you gave me a new perspective on them! I'll be more mindful of long ...