Shakyll

This is very, very good. I wish I could show this to every teenager in the world who thinks they're not worth anything. :] I love it. It seems exotic, ...

This is really beautiful and flowing--I just don't really get what you mean by "it is a rare opportunity to be a part of it." ? Other than that...it's a ...

...I love this.

absorbing and intriguing...I really like how all the different voices of his friends are calling out to him and tempting him in various ways. And, it's priceless how he tells ...

Is this about writers' block? It's really good. I love the lines "I just don’t know why some birds cannot fly, some wait till they die, some people must lie." ...

Really interesting poem. You might try making it flow a bit more, play around with synonyms. But I really liked it! Very good :]

Reganpark: yours was SO not a terrible review. nonsense. xD thank you!! :D i don't really know what happens...i kind of assumed she died...but nothing's set in stone. and yes, ...

edgy, dark, choppy, and brilliant. this, is a poem in a million. i'm not capable of going through it line by line, as it exceeds my mental prowess x) but ...

It's deep... and quietly, calmly bitter. Very good.

This is really good!! I think you might have spelled "chivalry" wrong though...but I really like it. i love the first verse. a lot. It's good. You should really try ...

I like it :) I love the part about the shepherd's love in the end. So glad to meet a fellow God lover on here x)

thank you guys :] I'll work on the characters and try to slow the rushed feeling. muchas gracias for taking the time xD

Ash: Thanks for your critique :D Yes, fear-scent is the scent of fear, because horses can sense emotions like that. The fear scent is his companions' fear and also his ...

I really like this. It's a gritty realism which a lot of girls are familiar with. Thanks. :)

Definitely keep it moves kinda too fast, though. Maybe slow it down, give more details and explanation. But I like it! keep it up.