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Re: That Can't Be Jesus, Where's the Crown?
"His words string out like a poem, His eyes are rich like oceans" ^^ Very nice lines. I love how you describe our Savior with such feeling for his compassion ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: I Believe
VERY nice. :)
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Iron Bars
Thanks both of yew.
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Iron Bars
thanks :D You've given me some stuff to work on ^^
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: I'll Lie
Reminds me of Tangled. :)
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Psalm of the Wanderer
I love this.
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: In Memoriam
I really like this. It's calm and yet it stabs. It's got an intensity without being too loud. Quite champion. I'm glad to see a poem about 9/11 on here.
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: The before and after of slapping someone with a wet fish.
I LOVE THIS. Not much else to say. :D
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Cage
This was the best poem I've ever read. Sorry I couldn't say more, but I have zero critique. I repeat: best poem ever.
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Happiness
This is a nice story. :) I love your wording "he could only go up." Champion.
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: .
Awww...this is sweet. I like your words and your sentence structures...I hope you get this girl if you want her this much. Probably could use some smoothing up, a few ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: The Sending of the Angels
And I hope you post the rest of the story/poem or whatever this is a beginning of :D anticipating!!!!
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Starved
cookEmonster: thank you! :D carboncore: well see, her point wasn't to look good. Introducing jealously of women on tv/magazines would have been irrelevant for her, because she didn't care about ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: S'harani
this was really good...very fast paced and interesting to read. suspenseful and captivating. a few typos, but not many. i really want to read the next chapter ^^
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: The Whispering of Seeds
ohhhhh this is good. and it's so true. smashingly heartbreaking reality. very good. your wording is excellent, your sentence structure is awesome. brilliant.
Jul 3, 2011