ShaikhTheWorld

Hi! Shakespeare? Don't you mean... Shaikhspeare?! (okay, sorry xD) Indeed, this was intended to be Spoken Word to an extent, and I understand how deleting certain parts may have improved ...

Thanks for pointing the unreadable nature out - I'll add the text form of the poem in a bit for others with the same problem. The use of 'Swag' at ...

Hello there! First of all, I have to thank you for how supportive you are throughout your review - reading it made my day! :D Indeed, I deliberately disrupted the ...

Hello there! Thanks for your informative review! :D Yes, the poem's 'beat' is personal and powerful to me, but won't necessarily translate to all my viewers - especially due to ...

I felt the story had to be longer since I was explaining my own absence and subsequent return - but I do agree that it could still have been made ...

I wrote this poem in a single setting, upon receiving divine revelation in a shaikhy form, hence the problems with being slightly wordy with somewhat inconsistent flow. xD Kidding aside, ...

Thanks for your comment! :D

Hey there! I usually group my lines in fours, this poem just turned out different, in a good way. :3 I understand where you're coming from with the "I want:" ...

This review was a pleasant read. Thank you for your kind words! :D

Yes, just noticed it and replied - thanks again! :3

Ah, I didn't realize that. 0_0 It's completely alright, thanks a ton for what you've already done - you can attempt the poem review whenever you feel like it. I'll ...

Hmm, I knew about word economy, but didn't think about the problem of purple prose. And yet, reading your article points me towards some red flags - thanks for that! ...

Thank you for your excellent review! Everything is so spot on, I'm dumbfounded! :3 You've been able to read what my intent was with the piece, as well as quoted ...

Haven't seen 'This is Us', but it sounds like a great show! I agree with you on what makes art so beautiful, and especially enjoy reading the interpretations of it ...

I realized that I forgot to give a 'Like' to your work, my bad. :P This was my first review on the site with this account, so thank you for ...