Shady

Thanks for the review! I do see what you mean about him getting desperate for attention then taking her some place extravagant -- but to be fair, his wealth is ...

Thanks again for the review! I make a bunch of little goofs with small words and commas and such and I appreciate you bringing them to my attention. I do ...

Haha! :)

Thanks for the review! :D As always you pointed out helpful inconsistencies and oopsies Rana makes through my mistakes haha. I agree with the bleh of her thinking about her ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I appreciate it! :D As far as "started" I meant that sort of jumpy thing people do when they're startled. Like you tense and kind ...

For sure! Ana is great ;) haha

Sure thing :D I'm glad it was helpful~ And lol, no problem with the kelp. It worked without the explanation. I just got curious haha. Thanks for sharing this story ...

Hehe sweet. I'll probably get them up sometime this week. I've finished the first draft of this novel but I didn't want to flood the Green Room all at once ...

Hahaha, can I just say that I adore your reviewing style? I was laughing as I read the majority of this one lol. I like the raw, gut reactions you ...

Thanks for the review! Definitely as helpful as always, and I'll go through to edit those goof-ups I made with the wording lol. I absolutely love your idea about the ...

Hehe right, I appreciate it :) I spent last fall in Bangkok, Thailand -- and learned how incredibly easy it is to offend people of other backgrounds when you 100% ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, Rana's more plus-sized. Not like morbidly obese and she's still pretty active (with the sparring and everything) but also not the extremely thin, fit sort ...

Thanks for the review! It's good to hear that the story is progressing well. I was a little nervous that I was taking it a bit too slow to hold ...

Good points... I see now how I didn't make some of those things clear and will go back to edit. Aldik is a man -- the part you quoted was ...

Thanks for the review! You caught a lot of things I missed, and I appreciate the help. I'll definitely go through and edit accordingly. Yes, Wyl is a prince. Jae ...